Writing Term 4 Week 2

Tell the story about these ducks.

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  1. Once upon a time there lived 3 ducklings and a Mama duck. She was teaching them how to swim in the water. Mama duck sneakily got a big life jacket and a pair of scissors. Of course she might of cut herself but she didn't. Mama duck was a very skilled duck so she easily snipped tiny life jackets. They weren't perfect but they looked good. As she put the life jackets on her ducklings she heard a little sound. She thought it was a rustle in the bush but they were photographers photoing Mama duck and her 3 little ducklings. As she hauled them into the water the photographers left. Mama duck quacked to her ducklings about how to stay afloat. The 3 ducklings got a hang of it and asked Mama duck to take there life jackets off. Mama duck said they could. So they all took their life jackets of and put them next to a rock. Then they started to swim. I guess about some hours later Mama duck called her 3 little ducklings for bed. The next day, photographs were in the newspaper. One was the photo right up here ^. Mama duck and her 3 ducklings were famous since that day. The End.

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  2. One day 3 ducklings were going to learn how to siwm. As soon as the were going in, their mum said "stop!" the ducklings were confused. She rushed back home and grabbed life jackets. The mother duck gave them to the ducklings. "Click." They were now ready to jump in the pond. The three ducklings enjoyed their day swimming safely.

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  3. Local duck news. Written by Doug Duck
    Only last saturday 15 october 2016 at 1:13 in the afternoon
    4 life jackets were stolen by Miss Puddle-Duck & her three children, Fluff, Beakey, and Cheepey. Then they were seen down at the lake poisoning the fish. 4 were found dead & 13 badly injured. Miss Puddle- Duck was sentenced to jail, she is still pleading guilty. Her lawyer said that it was an accident but how? After that she ran away. if you know anything about Miss Puddle- Duck, please contact 123456789 or 987654321. Considered dangerous so do not approach. (You may approach the ducklings though)

    3 DAYS LATER

    The case is closed. Miss Puddle- Duck is in jail for 100 years. Everyone now lives a happy life!

    THE END

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  4. There were 3 little ducklings with their mommy. One day mommy duck and her 3 little ducklings were walking to the pond for their flouting practice.Mommy dock was worried,maybe her 3 little ducks will drown. Mommy duck thought a plan, her plan was to make a 3 little life jacket for the 3 little. she would buy all the materials at the Duck's store. 3 weeks later she finished making the 3 life jackets, she put the life jackets on her 3 little ducklings. When all of them were in the pond it started raining. Mommy duck told her 3 little ducklings "You won't drown". One of the duckling told mommy dock "We cant do everything you say because we can't move" mommy duck took a little look at their neighbours they were not using live jackets. Mommy duck tried to free her babies, her babies just float and the 3 little ducklings knew how to float. THE END.

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  5. GGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAACCCCCEEEEEEOctober 19, 2016 at 9:14 PM

    There were once 3 little ducklings and their mother and father. The father was always out looking for food for the family while the mother looked after the children. Even though they were only little, their mother wanted them to learn how to swim. So she bought them a lifejacket and put them in the water. But then the mother duck saw a shark. "OooHhHhHh NOOOOO!!!!!" she screamed. So the mother duck flew and grabbed them, but as she was flying off, the shark bit off her leg. When they flew back home, they made her a leg out of their life jacket, so she could still swim and land from flying. Then the father came back and saw her. He felt sad, so they all had a big feast.

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  6. There was 3 little ducklings and their little pond outside of their house they were being duckling sat by their aunt slimy she was making them do their swimming lessons but they said NO N O SPELL NO they hated swimming lessons so aunt slimy did something fun so she put on life jackets one of them loved it one of them liked it and the other hated it so he just sat there aunt slimy was only watching the naughty duck and there was a crocodile hiding in the pond and SNAP it ate one of the ducks up they dont know what happened next THE END.

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  7. there were three ducklings (duck 1 duck 2 duck 3) duck 1 did a joke on duck 2 and he said how do you spell yes duck 2 said y e s
    now what is e y e s and duck 2 said yes duck 1 on it spell's eyes
    duck 3 said no more jokes mummy said a hour ago we are going swimming duck 1 said I can't swim duck 2 said but what if a crocodile in the water (PS: duck 3 is a goody good girl ) you do what mum tells you to why don't you try be as duck 3 no
    duck 1 ok ........ the end.

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